An example of Analytical Exposition

MERY ARIANSYAH 

The Example of Analytical Exposition

 “ The Problem of Being Too Fat “

Being too fat is commonly known as overweight or obesity. It is simply defined as too much body fat inside. Overweight potentially leads high risk of health problem.

Being too fat is recognized as a major factor for heart disease. Due to the overweight, the heart will work harder. It can lead to the heart attack. Furthermore, obesity potentially rises blood cholesterol and blood pressure. In addition, being too fat can change the amount of sugar in the blood. This will cause diabetes and other serious disease. Beside all of that, being too fat is often avoided by many young women. They said that becoming too fat will bother their physical beauty appearance.

More serious studies are necessary to see the effect of obesity. However it is clear enough that overweight is not good enough for healthy life.

The comments of analytical exposition above :

Personally, I think it is a good example of analytical exposition. Why do I say so? As we know that the good analytical exposition must have the generic structure ( thesis, series of arguments, and conclusion ) completely. Now we can also find the all of generic structure of analytical exposition above which me search in internet to you.

The first paragraph is an introduction of the writer’s concept which will explain, and we can find the thesis in paragraph one. Of course you know that the position of thesis is in the last part of introduction. So the thesis is “Overweight potentially leads high risk of health problem” . I think it is a good thesis statement.

Second paragraph shows us the series of argument. The arguments should support the thesis like in paragraph two which all of arguments support the thesis which explain the problem of obesity. So. I think it is good arguments too.

The last paragraph is a conclusion. In paragraph three, we can find “However it is clear enough that overweight is not good enough for healthy life “ is a good conclusion which conclude the writer’s explanation about the problem of obesity.

Well I think that’s all from me.... !!! J